Some alternative lockups using the tail element but making it look less like a 'P'. Also recoloured the logo to more of a fox red with blue background. Not exactly sure what the tagline will say below the logo so it's just a placeholder at the moment.
5 months ago
Awesome work, Loved the design No. 2 looks great!
I agree. No. 2 rocks.
Love the tail at the tail of "tail."
More awesome than v1. :)
Awesome! I taught that the bottom one says Tails because the tail looks a bit like the letter s :)
I was gonna suggest the tail at left in your other post, but the tail on the right is also alluring. Either way, these both look better than the first round. That said, I'm still thinking left is the way to go as it leads into the logo rather than capping it off- I feel the tail gets more attention paid to it that way.
As for color, these are a step in the right direction, but overall it's pretty dark where I feel it should be light. I also agree with whoever it was in your first post that suggested going with red on the logo instead of orange. Red is more common on cars than orange, yes, but it is also a very indicative color of paint and painted craft. Just look at the Sherwin-Williams logo, for instance.
Ah, I see you went "reddish" in these versions, but not full-on red. Well, I understand the hesitation, but I hope you at least play with it in some actually red values and see how it looks ;)
The top one sucks and the bottom one is awesome. You choose.
The bottom one just makes more sense, but for some reason I'm drawn to the top one more.
Agree with @Ryan O. Hicks
I think I like the original one best.
It was the most balanced optically. One might argue that a 'tail' should be at the end of something, but these 2 versions feel like they'd be much more difficult to work with, as the optical centre is way off the actual middle of the mark.
As an aside, because of the positioning and angle being more natural, the original tail feels like it relates closer to a brush than these two do.
Whichever one you go with, keep up the good work :)
Like them both, but definitely agree that the tail on the end makes the most sense.
I like the bottom one.
For some reason I can't explain, I like the first one. But the second makes more sense.
(totally agree with Ryan O. Hicks and Kevin Burr).
No 2. :)
Epic tail! :) Number 2.
Number two, seeing as it's on the tail of the letter and not the arm.
no. 2 is so good! great job!
Like number two more but, as some already said: it looks like a 's'.
Can't think of anything to fix that though!
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