Kicking off Development

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  1. Grayden Poper Grayden Poper

    Personal project that I have been working on over that past year at the pace of a snail. Hopefully I can share the live version before the end of the year.

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    5 months ago

  2. Kevin N. Coleman Kevin N. Coleman

    Very clean. Love it. Did you do the photography as well?

    I know it’s a grammar-nerdy thing, but I think it should be “each guy had his own reasoning.” Though colloquial, “their” is a plural possessive pronoun, and “each” dictates singular subjects.

    Not looking to criticize—only to help. :)

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    5 months ago

  3. Jared Hill Jared Hill

    Great white space and cool use of type!

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    5 months ago

  4. Jerod Guillen Jerod Guillen

    very nicelye done. dig the bold header and threatening bloody red.

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    5 months ago

  5. Matt Lackey Matt Lackey

    Sounds like a story about Tunnel Rats. I'm hooked just reading this excerpt. Dig the serif typeface and layout choices. Gives off that old printed manual feel.

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    5 months ago

  6. Morgan Seibert Morgan Seibert

    I love it!! I like the type... it fits well. There is something nostalgic about it. Just one thing the shadow of the bullet doesn't match the gun.

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    5 months ago

  7. Grayden Poper Grayden Poper

    @Matt Lackey You hit the nail on the head. When ever it launches I will do my best to let you know. Thanks for the kind words and enthusiasm.

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    5 months ago

  8. Grayden Poper Grayden Poper

    @Kevin N. Coleman Nice catch but I can't do much about the grammar since I did not write the story.

    5 months ago

  9. Kevin N. Coleman Kevin N. Coleman

    Ah.

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    5 months ago

  10. Zack Travis Zack Travis

    Tasty.

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    5 months ago

  11. Chad Casper Chad Casper

    Fresh as always!

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    5 months ago

  12. Sant Valentin Sant Valentin

    Shoot 'em, man :)
    Nice !

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    5 months ago

  13. Erwin Hines Erwin Hines

    Looking sexy bro. One small note, I would love to see the shadows on the gun and the bullet should be going the same way so they feel like they are really sitting on a surface with type around it.

    5 months ago

  14. Joseph Alessio Joseph Alessio

    Dude! This looks amazing, very well designed and politically-correct or not, guns are always intriguing. Looking forward to seeing the project!

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    4 months ago

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