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  1. Pascal Gärtner Pascal Gärtner

    Been working on this site for the last couple of days. The site is for a NYC based company/startup which is about consumer data and is going to go live in the next couple of days.

    As a small side note: we are not sure yet whether or not to ditch the blog section, but we do know that this section needs to be changed.

    Feedback is as always much appreciated.

    Make sure to check out the attachment to see the entire design.

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    6 months ago

  2. VINCE VINCE

    you are so great

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    6 months ago

  3. Pascal Gärtner Pascal Gärtner

    Cheers, @VINCE. This means a lot to me!

    6 months ago

  4. Lee Thomas Lee Thomas

    I really like this! The only thing I would mention is that maybe the actual company logo could be a little larger? I found myself drawn to the word "Logo" in the browser shot more than the actual one. Or maybe muting that a little might do the job?

    Obviously this is just my feedback based on this page.

    Good work!

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    6 months ago

  5. Damian Hernandez Damian Hernandez

    Nice and clean.
    I would recommend to put the “Build trust..” aligned at the top of the screen and maybe vertically align the logo and the like and follow: http://d.pr/i/GRwe

    Just my two cents.

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    6 months ago

  6. Stedesign Stedesign

    Into the header on the left the grey paragraph needs more contrast.

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    6 months ago

  7. Thilo Becker Thilo Becker

    what kind of grid did you use here?

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    6 months ago

  8. Danny Giebe Danny Giebe

    haha I just clicked randomly in dribbble and looked at it and my first thought: hey this looks like a designer with the same style as Pascals. Then I read the name and....it is Pascal ;) Looks good :) I would change the color of the text in the header section. the contrast isn't the best to the background image.

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    6 months ago

  9. Thorsten Beeck Thorsten Beeck

    Apart from the Facebook and Twitter icons I really like it. Isn’t it possible to display Facebook and Twitter in a cooler way?

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    6 months ago

  10. Rosie Pringle Rosie Pringle

    Cool... I actually designed that dashboard application for them :D

    Small world.

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    6 months ago

  11. Pascal Gärtner Pascal Gärtner

    @Lee Thomas @Damian Hernandez @Stedesign @th1lo @Rosie Pringle @Thorsten Beeck @Danny Giebe Thanks for the feedback guys, it's much appreciated! :)

    @Rosie Pringle Haha! That's kind of funny and the world is really small indeed. :)

    @Thorsten Beeck I had custom buttons before, but the client wanted to display in their default styling.

    @Danny Giebe Maybe I should work on my style so that it's not as much recognisable anymore. :P

    @th1lo The grid is based on the 960.gs

    @Stedesign Good spot and I already fixed that. :)

    @Damian Hernandez I had the headline aligned with the image in one of the earlier iterations, but it just didn't look good to me. I'll give your second suggestions definitely a try as it really makes sense to me. Thanks, Damian!

    @Lee Thomas Good spot, dude! I'll definitely work on this to put more emphasis on the logo rather than on the logo in the screenshot. Thanks, once again!

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    6 months ago

  12. Damian Hernandez Damian Hernandez

    You're welcome buddy!

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    6 months ago

  13. Thorsten Beeck Thorsten Beeck

    @Pascal Gärtner Haha I know that.....but the client is the boss. ;)

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    6 months ago

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