Vintage Theater

15 Responses

1. Jesus™

   Another Illustration. It's WIP and would love your feedback.

   3likes

   7 months ago

2. Jon McClure

   I like the idea of the palm tree, but maybe making that and the clouds fit the same style (more symmetrical and round).

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   7 months ago

3. tiagocastro

   Love it!!

   7 months ago

4. Rodrigo Grundig

   @Jesus !

   7 months ago

5. Jeremiah Wingett

   I really like the palm tree. Nice lil' touch. Wondering if the clouds could match the style more... IDK.

   Awesome overall!

   1likes

   7 months ago

6. Laura Bohill

   I like the palm tree, but I don't think the balance is there, like how you have it with the skyline in your other shot. Maybe you could have some form of silhouetted shrubbery bottom left and right of the building, as if coming from behind the building.

   In other news. It makes me sick this is so good!

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   7 months ago

7. Jeroen van Eerden

   Awesome!

   7 months ago

8. Ambert Rodriguez

   you're a beast bro

   1likes

   7 months ago

9. Linda Eliasen

   I'd love to just bust out a whole world in this style with you. So fun and simple and good. Great work.

   4likes

   7 months ago

10. Jesus™

    @Laura Bohill @Jeremiah Wingett @Jon McClure
    Thank you for the feedback. The style of the tree definitely needs to be more cohesive. I'll tighten that up.
    -
    @Linda Eliasen A whole world! How about we just do 1/16 of a world?
    Thank you for the kind words :)

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    7 months ago

11. Katarina Stefanikova

    Great work :)

    7 months ago

12. Christopher Reece

    So good!

    7 months ago

13. Joe Nicklo

    Solid. I'd not duplicate the clouds, make a second, unique one. The palm tree also looks like it's growing out of the roof, have you tried placing it off to the side of the building?

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    6 months ago

14. Nelson Noa

    Great work, great to see designers from Miami Florida :)

    5 months ago

15. Graphicsoulz

    Great job!

    3 months ago