NYC F.C. Crest Concept

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  1. Pete Schwadel Pete Schwadel

    SO IT'S FINALLY HERE. My NYCFC crest concept, I hope you guys tear it to shreds! Let me know what you think! See attached for better view.

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    8 months ago

  2. Ryan Welch Ryan Welch

    Terrible. Just kidding man I think it's great I love the shadowing throughout. The one thing I would mention is possibly beefing up the bridge, having less vertical bars and have them be a bit thicker. That way they wouldn't get lost if say the logo was stitched in a hat or shown smaller.

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    8 months ago

  3. Matthew Wolff Matthew Wolff

    Awesome work Pete! Loving the overall structure of this, the top part especially. Two small things:

    1. I believe the inaugural season will be 2015.
    2. I'm sort of seeing a fried egg in the center there (yellow circle in white oval), but maybe that's just because I'm hungry. Try adjusting the sun, perhaps?

    Keep up the good work.

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    8 months ago

  4. Gabe Taviano Gabe Taviano

    Dig the initial design. I'd agree with maybe making the bridge a bit larger. One thing I might try is turning the gold circle into a soccer ball :-)

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    8 months ago

  5. Brian Gundell Brian Gundell

    Gorgeous! Great work Pete, it's been fun to watch you come along as a designer. Definitely agree with some of the other comments before. For the sun, maybe make some actual radials come off of it, extending down below the bridge? Could be a nice way to tie it all together. Love the Chrysler building as the crest holding shape!

    8 months ago

  6. Tomislav Tomislav

    I agree with that comment on CC forum, the bridge is a bit San Fran :) but the art deco Chrysler top is beautiful. Maybe bringing the bottom part more up, a lot of white space in the BG right now in my opinion :)

    7 months ago

  7. Frank Rodriguez Frank Rodriguez

    Amazing work!! The Chrysler building as a shape of the crest is brilliant. My two cents would be the same as @Tomislav, It feels more like a SF bridge. Also, the sun feels a bit lonely, maybe rays (like @Brian Gundell suggested) or clouds to create some sort of atmosphere? Other than that this is incredible. Thanks for sharing!

    7 months ago

  8. Took some criticism to the design, possibly over-did the Brooklyn Bridge, but it's all about trying to see what you can make look good. Before you ask - the sun.

    7 months ago

  9. Danny Singh Danny Singh

    Beautiful! I love this! Catches feeling of NY really well. Only suggestion I have would be implementing a Soccer ball or something relating to the sport for the non-aficinados

    6 months ago

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