Florida State Seminoles

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  1. Brandon Moore Brandon Moore

    i really like this. theres a couple of details to watch out for thought. the neck line should follow the contour of the feather, the front of the neck gets a bit too close to the feather. avoid those tangents. also same thing with the bottom of the feather and the containing shape. i think it gets just a bit too tight there too.

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    7 months ago

  2. Tom Philibeck Tom Philibeck

    If I'm being honest, it kind of looks like he's about to sneeze.

    7 months ago

  3. Mark Crosby Mark Crosby

    @Tom Philibeck This is a problem with their current logo as well, I tried my best to fix it, but it's not an easy task. Any suggestions?

    7 months ago

  4. Tom Philibeck Tom Philibeck

    Hard to say, but I kind of think it's the shape of the mouth. I'm sure that's not the only factor, though. Maybe the eyebrows need to be a a bit more sharp of an angle. I could be way off.

    7 months ago

  5. ...here's an update of my FSU update. The feather is now almost directly from the newly released logo, the jawline/cheekbone has also been updated.

    2 days ago

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