Oktoberfest Beer Stein - Sketch

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I'm working on an idea for Oktoberfest. The question that I have, do you feel it's appropriate to split "Oktoberfest" onto two lines like this? I've seen it done before and for this particular composition, all one line doesn't really work.

I want to do a block print of this but don't want to spend all the time if this type doesn't work. Would love to hear some feedback. Thanks!

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