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  1. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    Here is a landing page I am working on for Memoir. Please give me some feedback on how it is... Too chopped and segmented? Or no?

    This app has taken so many shapes, but we feel we finally have found the right one, so we submitted it to the App Store. I will tweet as soon as it is live.

    Thanks to Catt for the iPhone template!

    PS, the lame stock photo of the girl will be replaced with a real snap from the video we did.

    As always - Real Pixels

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    8 months ago

  2. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    Also, thanks to @Eddie Lobanovskiy for the icon work he did!

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    8 months ago

  3. Andrea Cau Andrea Cau

    Lovely site. Good job @Eric!

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    8 months ago

  4. Ben Lee Ben Lee

    Great idea! Can't wait 'til it's live.

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    8 months ago

  5. Piper Lawson Piper Lawson

    This looks great!

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    8 months ago

  6. Wells Riley Wells Riley

    Love the "New and Noteworthy" badge.

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    8 months ago

  7. Mike Busby Mike Busby

    Nice work as usual Eric. I love the colours used and the blurred BG.

    I don't feel it's segmented. I like the coloured bar you're using.

    Only thing I'd like to see is the headings of each section using a heavier font weight.

    Edit: Also I think the illustration styles of the iPhones should match.

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    8 months ago

  8. Zarin Ficklin Zarin Ficklin

    Looks slick!

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    8 months ago

  9. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    Thanks everyone! @Wells Riley Apple has their eye on this and already told us we would be. (Hope so)

    @Mike Busby thanks dude! Will try that and see what happens

    @Zarin Ficklin thank man! See ya tomorrow evening for the Dribbble meet up?

    8 months ago

  10. Claudio Gomboli Claudio Gomboli

    It's a very nice design, but as you said I feel it's a little bit chopped and segmented overall. Probably the sections are too much different, specially colors. More consistent colors among the sections would help I think.

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  11. Donald Johns Donald Johns

    I like what I see @Eric Hoffman

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    8 months ago

  12. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    @Claudio Gomboli thanks! I will play around with some of the colors. I think the animations will help and forgive some of this segmented feel as well.

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    8 months ago

  13. Zarin Ficklin Zarin Ficklin

    Yep, looking forward to it!

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    8 months ago

  14. Robbert Esser Robbert Esser

    Nice. Very nice.

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    8 months ago

  15. Néstor Palao Néstor Palao

    Cool work mate!

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    8 months ago

  16. Barthelemy Chalvet Barthelemy Chalvet

    Cool work @Eric Hoffman. Love colors

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    8 months ago

  17. Chris No Chris No

    This is really nice. Loving the color palette! The text needs to be more noticeable. The images and background textures are so vibrant that the text gets a little lost in the mix. Also, the different angled phones seem a little weird for me. It feels inconsistent with the amount of space it's taking up on the left column.

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    8 months ago

  18. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    @Chris No yep, @Mike Busby was saying the same thing. (re)Working text

    8 months ago

  19. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    @Agence Me (via Barthélémy Chalvet) thanks!! Love your work.

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    8 months ago

  20. Michael Parks Michael Parks

    Hey Eric, this looks great! I Love It!

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    8 months ago

  21. Eric Hoffman Eric Hoffman

    Thanks @Michael Parks!

    8 months ago

  22. Jon Sutherland Jon Sutherland

    Great job! The "Introducing Memoir for iPhone" text looks like it could be moved down a few pixels

    8 months ago

  23. Elliot Greenwood Elliot Greenwood

    I love the colours & the icons down the right-hand side!

    The only thing I'd remove is the segmented bar along the top, it works between the sections, but personally I think it isn't adding anything at the top.

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    8 months ago

  24. Luke Etheridge Luke Etheridge

    Beautiful!! Taking the standard app sales sites to the next level bud. Really solid work.

    8 months ago

  25. Eddie Lobanovskiy Eddie Lobanovskiy

    Love that dotted line with icons along the right side. Beautiful work bro!

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