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  1. Eli Schiff Eli Schiff

    I'm excited to share with you the release of NoteAway, the convenient cloud syncing app for taking notes. I worked with developer Pico Mitchell of Random Applications to design the app icon and custom toolbar icons.

    NoteAway has been live in the Mac App Store for a launch price of $0.99 and quickly reached the Top 10 in Productivity apps. Go check it out!

    8 months ago

  2. Yummygum Yummygum

    Like it a lot

    8 months ago

  3. Wil Nichols Wil Nichols

    Really like it. Few things, though.

    Perspective tile on the glyph is too strong for the cloud. The cloud doesn't look to be tilting back, but the glyph does. And light should diffuse from the glyph —yours doesn't.


    8 months ago

  4. Oz Pinhas Oz Pinhas

    Damn it's pretty.

    8 months ago

  5. Eli Schiff Eli Schiff

    @Yummygum @Oz Pinhas Thanks guys :D

    @Wil Nichols Giving valuable critique as usual. I tried a few variations and made perspective guides and it appeared to be in correct perspective with the same vanishing point.

    When you say light should diffuse from the glyph do you mean there should be a frosty blur outside of it?

    I've attached the 1024px version.

    8 months ago

  6. Andrea Cau Andrea Cau

    Really nice work!


    8 months ago

  7. Wil Nichols Wil Nichols

    @Eli Schiff the perspective may be technically correct. However, the lighting is soft enough and the cloud appears never to bevel, more to pillow. @Ollin would disagree, but I'd cheat the grid and tilt the glyph forward.

    Frosty? Maybe - just some type of diffused blur from the glyph.


    8 months ago

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    8 months ago

  9. Mindpuzzles Mindpuzzles

    Clean and volumetric!


    7 months ago

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