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  1. James T. Edmondson James T. Edmondson

    f is looking too heavy. What else duves?

    10 months ago

  2. James T. Edmondson James T. Edmondson

    This is type, not lettering btw.

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    10 months ago

  3. Estie Carrillo Estie Carrillo

    Did you try doing something to any of those two capital "C"? not really digging the repetition. You could try give one of those priority and edit the other one to be a bit less prominent.

    Hope that helps dude!

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    10 months ago

  4. Danielle Evans Danielle Evans

    In line with Estie's comment, the swashes are all located on the far left, making the whole feel visually imbalanced. If all title case swashes stay, I'd be curious to see a flourished alternate on the 's', maybe the 'a'.

    The first 'l' in 'College' feels a tad awkward with the loop and the 'ol' connection.

    It's beautiful regardless. Good luck with your tweaks!

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    10 months ago

  5. Mattox Shuler Mattox Shuler

    Dudepal looking good. Really like the overall vibe. I'm sure this'll be a huge hit when it releases. Just a few things I'm seeing:
    - For the /f/ you could try doing a top loop (like in the /l/ ) to even it out the weight.
    - The /th/ in "the" feels a little off-kilter as if the /t/ is not slanted as much as the /h/
    - /A/ feels a bit narrow

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    10 months ago

  6. John Kane John Kane

    Dig what you did with those lower case o's. Almost wanna see more of that looper thinger coming through...

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    10 months ago

  7. Greg Gazdowicz Greg Gazdowicz

    i feel like the r, h, and n might be slightly too narrow. But I could be wrong, I'm not wearing glasses right now haha.

    10 months ago

  8. James T. Edmondson James T. Edmondson

    All good comments! Thanks for da feedback. ^______^

    10 months ago

  9. James T. Edmondson James T. Edmondson

    @Mattox Shuler Probably won't release this (just for a one-off project), but thanks!

    10 months ago

  10. Nikita Prokhorov Nikita Prokhorov

    Don't know if this has been mentioned by anyone off-Dribbble, but what about looping the 'f', much like the 'l'?

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    10 months ago

  11. Jason Carne Jason Carne

    Having the capitals fall below the baseline feels really awkward to me - as does them ending before the ascender heights.

    I agree with giving the "f" a similar loop to the "l". Also, the titles over each "i" optically feels a bit too large.

    10 months ago

  12. Samm McAlear Samm McAlear

    The "e" seems a little wide, and slightly taller the the bar of the "h"

    10 months ago

  13. Samm McAlear Samm McAlear

    maybe it's just optically

    10 months ago

  14. Riley Cran Riley Cran

    r and h slightly narrow?

    Looks great!

    10 months ago

  15. Star St.Germain Star St.Germain

    I start teaching a summer program at CCA tomorrow.
    Seeing this across my dash at this moment feels serendipitous.

    10 months ago

  16. Rich Merwarth Rich Merwarth

    Not sure if it's the "t" or the "h" or the connector between them, but that pair feels a little janky/off parallel.

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    10 months ago

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