Williston 2

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  1. Mike Bruner Mike Bruner

    did a little tweaking to this one. Still working on it, but thanks for the suggestions. Appreciate it.

    12 months ago

  2. Jason Barry Jason Barry

    Definitely like the "ND" better on this version.

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    12 months ago

  3. Bryan Butler Bryan Butler

    Guy Fieri says, "Yo, that Williston is on point!"

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    12 months ago

  4. Matt Vergotis Matt Vergotis

    Great adjustments, Mike. Dig!

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    12 months ago

  5. Florian Gampert Florian Gampert

    Wow great typographic work!

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    12 months ago

  6. Tomas Vateha Tomas Vateha

    I like this one, great typo work!

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    12 months ago

  7. Adam Nerland Adam Nerland

    Dig it. Good call on the "ND" treatment. It makes the "Williston" wordmark stand on its own a bit more. The "W" swash looks better, too, although, for some reason, I feel like the thickness should be on the left side of the swash rather than the bottom. (More like it is on the opposite side where it crosses the T)

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    12 months ago

  8. Danielle Evans Danielle Evans

    This is SO beautiful. If anything needs a tweak, it might be the 's'. The other letters have some dimensionality to them, but the 's' looks a little flat.

    Regardless I'm curious if Williston lives up to this hype, as I'm fully expecting coolness and style.

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    12 months ago

  9. Kevin Fischer Kevin Fischer

    Really dig how this flows!

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    12 months ago

  10. Mike Bruner Mike Bruner

    @Jason Barry Thank you sir.
    @Bryan Butler Williston will love that! :)
    @Matt Vergotis , @Florian Gampert and @Tomas Vateha thanks for the comments. I appreciate the feedback on the first post.
    @Adam Nerland good review. I looked at adding the heavier swash at the top of the "W" but it felt a tad top heavy. Thanks though, I may have to take another look while I tighten things up.
    @Josh White I'll revisit visit soon. :)
    @Danielle Evans thanks for the insight on the "s". I'll look into it.
    @Kevin Fischer appreciate the feedback.
    Cheers everyone and thanks for taking a look and critiques.

    12 months ago

  11. Cory Angen Cory Angen

    Getting even better, Mike! Swash on the 'W' looks much better with the weight variation. The size and style change on 'ND' to match 'visit' looks much better, but I think the weight on 'visit' is a little light now. Maybe somewhere between this and the previous version. The script is still right on point. Love it.

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    12 months ago

  12. Mike Bruner Mike Bruner

    @Cory Angen thanks for the insight. Nice to hear from a former ND guy.
    cheers.

    12 months ago

  13. Indian Indian

    Perfect W.

    11 months ago

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