Working on some type for a thing, thoughts so far?
12 months ago
Too hot! Should the "r" have a serif?
Nice! Agree with @Jed Bridges
I really love the mix of hard angles and rounded counters. @Jed is onto something! The 'rd' ligature looks a little hard, but that could be a by-product of in progress. Keep it up- can't wait to see the whole thing!
The last stroke on the 'a' seems a bit awkward? Nice though!
Great start! I would agree with the others. A serif on the "r" and make the height of the "r" stem match with the "a".
Thanks for the feedback guys! :D
don't want to hate to bad, the "d" tail should flow better and more of a straight line into the "e". I'm sure you have been staring at it too long. I like the direction. Sometimes it helps to reverse the colors or flip it upside down so you don't focus so much on the letters and more of the flow.
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