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  1. James Graves James Graves

    Working on some type for a thing, thoughts so far?

    12 months ago

  2. Jed Bridges Jed Bridges

    Too hot! Should the "r" have a serif?

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    12 months ago

  3. Marc Aspinall Marc Aspinall

    Nice! Agree with @Jed Bridges

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    12 months ago

  4. Danielle Evans Danielle Evans

    I really love the mix of hard angles and rounded counters. @Jed is onto something! The 'rd' ligature looks a little hard, but that could be a by-product of in progress. Keep it up- can't wait to see the whole thing!

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    12 months ago

  5. George Drury George Drury

    The last stroke on the 'a' seems a bit awkward? Nice though!

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    12 months ago

  6. Justin Ellis Justin Ellis

    Great start! I would agree with the others. A serif on the "r" and make the height of the "r" stem match with the "a".

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    12 months ago

  7. James Graves James Graves

    Thanks for the feedback guys! :D

    12 months ago

  8. Christopher Martin Christopher Martin

    don't want to hate to bad, the "d" tail should flow better and more of a straight line into the "e". I'm sure you have been staring at it too long. I like the direction. Sometimes it helps to reverse the colors or flip it upside down so you don't focus so much on the letters and more of the flow.

    12 months ago

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