Header design

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  1. Martin Burdon Martin Burdon

    The header for a design I'm working on.

    I'm a little unsure about the arrow drawing the users attention to the "Book Now" area so feedback would be welcome :)

    Thanks

    12 months ago

  2. Erika Podlovics Erika Podlovics

    Looks great! Maybe make the arrow more translucent so that it draws the eye, but isn't the focus. Right now it looks brighter than the welcome box which, I think, should be the brightest thing on the page.

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    12 months ago

  3. Adam Nerland Adam Nerland

    Ha, I saw this logo before and figured it was a joke/personal project related to Parks & Rec. Is this a real thing? Looks awesome anyway.

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    12 months ago

  4. Adam Nerland Adam Nerland

    Feedback-wise, if your call to action is "Book Now," I'd probably make the text on that button a little bigger. As it is now, it's almost the same size as the body text on that welcome message. You could definitely afford to bump that up a little.

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    12 months ago

  5. Martin Burdon Martin Burdon

    @Erika Podlovics Good idea, I'll give that a try I think that'll do it :)

    @Adam Nerland 10 points for spotting the reference ;) it's a fictional site I'm doing for the Build Off feature in .net magazine, as I've been watching Parks & Rec lately and the brief was a camping site I thought it'd be perfect :) Thanks for the feedback too, a very good point, sometimes you stare at a design too long and miss the obvious

    12 months ago

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