Film Festival WIP

10 Responses

  1. Shane Helm Shane Helm

    Seeking critique to make this better. Ideas?

    about 1 year ago

  2. Christian Shannon Christian Shannon

    Hey Shane, love the spacing of the grid, the guttering is just right. Maybe move the footer links to the left so they sit flush with the start of the HBO logo?

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    about 1 year ago

  3. Jeremy Mansfield Jeremy Mansfield

    Hard to tell without full context of the page. First glance looks like your footer grid is off. Otherwise, looks nice and clean.

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    about 1 year ago

  4. Shane Helm Shane Helm

    Thanks @Christian Shannon & @Jeremy Mansfield — I will occupy the space with the site logo.

    about 1 year ago

  5. Emma Walker Emma Walker

    Agree with @Jeremy Mansfield , it's hard to give feedback w/o context. Is that a diamond pattern at the top?

    about 1 year ago

  6. Maxwell Barvian Maxwell Barvian

    Well I think it's looking good. Maybe increase the spacing between the two lines of text on top of each movie?

    about 1 year ago

  7. Andrew Littmann Andrew Littmann

    Shane, nice grid man. Looks great. My only suggestion would be to give more distinction in the type between category and headline. (ie. between "Panels" and Kabir Bedi) I think some separation in there would look great.

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    about 1 year ago

  8. Boone Sommerfeld Boone Sommerfeld

    Love the muted tan/black color palette. #classy.

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    about 1 year ago

  9. Shaun Moynihan Shaun Moynihan

    Given the absence of the logo in the footer I really like this overall. I do feel the tan background could be lightened up a little. Keep up the great work @Shane Helm!

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    about 1 year ago

  10. Shane Helm Shane Helm

    Thanks @Shaun Moynihan and for sharing on Twitter. I'll try lightening it up.

    about 1 year ago

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