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  1. Naoshad Naoshad

    Working on this project!

    Check @2x Please!!

    about 1 year ago

  2. Philip Clark Philip Clark

    Hey Naoshad, this is an interesting concept. Sort of similar to the now-acquired Milo.com (online research to offline shopping). I have a few thoughts: 1) The copy needs some improvement - it's not really clear what the platform does for based on the title and subtitles. Is it an app for your phone? Think about it in terms of benefits - what benefits does this have? Make those big and obvious. 2) Can you show how a business uses this service to improve their sales? I feel like a case study would be super valuable here, b/c I still don't totally understand how the platform works. 3) There's a lot of white space. I think you could stand to bump up some font sizes, and increase the overall size of elements to make the page feel more cohesive.

    Looking forward to seeing more from this project - sounds really cool!

    about 1 year ago

  3. about 1 year ago

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