Ben Cline
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  1. 5 Dec
    Ben Cline
    Followed Drew Endly.
  2. 24 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on Mars — National Geographic

    @Olly Sorsby no, not defensive at all. @Geof Crowl and I & the rest of the @RALLY team want to start giving real feedback on dribbble again not just "that looks nice" 😉

  3. 23 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on like the time

    The illustrations are beautiful! Why not go full screen with them?

    I agree with Adam that colored pagination dots actually clash a bit with the rest of the screen.

    What else is supposed to happen on this UI besides swiping back and forth?

  4. 23 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on Nobrand Project

    I'd also be curious to see the header display text without the gradient :)

  5. 23 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on Mars — National Geographic

    This has a lot of good atmosphere to it.

    While this is a visual improvement on what exists, in some ways it lacks context especially in the hero area. I’d love to see more of a schematic / geometric overlay up top to help capture a bit more of the story.

    What is the significance of the Mission Log being bigger? It looks a bit like a rollover state? The 3 up horizontal grid feels a bit “kitchen sink” stagnant. Can something be done with this layout to help open up the composition?

    Additional nit pick: the hexagon below feels a touch out of place.

  6. 23 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on Nobrand Project

    The easing of the elements feels a bit too fast and abrupt here. Was this due to having to speed it up for GIF file size?

  7. 23 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Commented on Element Board Exploration

    This is looking pretty rad. The mash-up of styles definitely has some dissonance but at the same time it feels pretty connected.

    I'm curious about the uppercase vs. titlecase that is happening with the type treatments. It may feel a bit more connected if one or two other decisions get made such as that one.

    The geometric illustration over the photo on top clashes slightly with the hand drawn elements.

    More context of course always helps :)

  8. 18 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Followed Andrea Montoya.
  9. 17 Nov
    Ben Cline
    Followed Alex Estrada.
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