Lovely! But in my opinion that bookmark shading needs some more work. Or maybe make the pages stand out more around it.
Now it just looks like sticker.
Amazing first shot! How could I not "like" this!? The paper is my favorite (always tough) and the ribbon or bookmark is probably the only thing I could see improving a bit. The detail in it might be a bit too light (once it gets so small) and the red seems to be a bit off like you mentioned.
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At last, my first dribbble :) This is an icon for an upcoming app I'm working on. I'm still not sure if I like the font here… ¬¬
It's a bit scaled down. You can see the original size here: http://d.pr/hCqW
over 2 years ago
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Dan Cederholm
That's beautiful. Welcome to Dribbble!
over 2 years ago
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Mario Bieh
Cool perspective. Very realistic look.
over 2 years ago
Great backdrop on that nice icon!
over 2 years ago
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Alberto Calvo
Tremendo!
over 2 years ago
Thank you, guys!
over 2 years ago
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Jonathan Ogden
Looks great! Love the reflection and perspective you've got going on.
over 2 years ago
great perspective!
over 2 years ago
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Marian Mraz
Lovely! But in my opinion that bookmark shading needs some more work. Or maybe make the pages stand out more around it.
Now it just looks like sticker.
over 2 years ago
@Marian Mraz You are right. I'm already working on that. And on the color of the bookmark too. Thank you!
over 2 years ago
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Sean Smith
Very nice!
over 2 years ago
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Michael Spitz
Great icon!
over 2 years ago
We want more!
over 2 years ago
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Steve Lowtwait
Beautiful piece! I want to pick it up with two fingers and flip through it with my pinky. :)
Welcome to Dribbble!
over 2 years ago
Great debut, welcome!:)
over 2 years ago
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Stan Grinapol
Love it! Awesome Debut, Welcome to dribble
over 2 years ago
Well done!
over 2 years ago
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Gianluca Divisi
Welcome to Dribbble!
over 2 years ago
Wow, thank you guys! This is what I call a warm welcome :)
over 2 years ago
Looks fantastic.
over 2 years ago
jeese, best one i've seen yet.
over 2 years ago
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Jean-Marc Denis
Welcome. Nice work!
over 2 years ago
Amazing first shot! How could I not "like" this!? The paper is my favorite (always tough) and the ribbon or bookmark is probably the only thing I could see improving a bit. The detail in it might be a bit too light (once it gets so small) and the red seems to be a bit off like you mentioned.
Still, stunning and inspiring!
about 2 years ago
Thanks a lot for your suggestions, Jay! The app is going to be released in the next few days and the icon has been improved a bit.
about 2 years ago