Looking for some solid feedback on this direction.
9 months ago
Is there any way to avoid the cropping of the N?
@Jay Roberts what industry does Daniel Davis work in? I like the "A-V" connection, but its reminding me of a EKG line. Is it contextually important? Also, the cropped leg of that "N" makes the composition feel a bit forced. Increasing the tracking might help.
Agreed with @Andy Hayes - maybe increase the tracking of the letters? I think the leading needs to be increased as well because the second 'A' in between the legs (ha) of the first one is a little awkward. Like the direction though, just that central element is cramped as it is.
@Andy Hayes @Tristan M. Cofer @Glen Thorpe Thanks guys! Definitely will mess with the tracking.
@Tristan M. Cofer Daniel is a photographer.
I really like this. I don't mind the slice off the N. But if you go with the cropping of the N, then I think the D's (and other letters) need to be kerned tighter. The D's look isolated from the rest of the wordmark. I love the mark at the end. Subtle, but it works well.
I know this sounds crazy, but is there any way to make the E and L friends? Because 'Danie' and 'Davis' align, then the L is a lone ranger. I'd just like to see the E hold his hand if he can. Maybe even just scooting him over a couple pixels. Maybe that would be too inconsistent with the rest though.
@Derrick Kempf Thanks for the feedback Derrick.
@becky murphy I like this hand-holding idea! Thanks Becky.
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