Looks good. I am just curious what it would look like if you were to bring the "i" down some (lining it with the bottom of the R), placing the stroke on top instead of bottom.
-- after thought --
My thought is if you were to do that - it may not be strong enough to redirect the eye and force attention to the detail.
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Cesar Torres
Third attempt at fixing the need for a chevron at the bottom of the banner. Is it me or does it feel like it's missing something?
over 1 year ago
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Jerett Patterson
Looks good. I am just curious what it would look like if you were to bring the "i" down some (lining it with the bottom of the R), placing the stroke on top instead of bottom.
-- after thought --
My thought is if you were to do that - it may not be strong enough to redirect the eye and force attention to the detail.
over 1 year ago