Script I've been working on for a client, all homemade. I've been told the name of the company is going to change, but I figure I'll share anyway.
Any thoughts? I was a little uncertain about the P and the F, specifically whether their heaviness in relation to the other letters is a problem, and whether they work well with the rest of the script and each other.
2 months ago
This is really nicely handled, especially considering the length of the words. There's a lovely rhythm to it that feels consistent without being repetitive. Love the connections throughout! The 'i-l' is a great touch, as is the 'a-s'.
For the capitals, they do feel quite heavy – I think lightening them up a little would prevent them from overpowering the lowercase. I also wonder if there would be a way to incorporate a little cut in the 'F', mimicking your treatment of the 'P'.
about 1 month ago
@Claire Coullon Thanks so much for your feedback, Claire.
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