I don't work with script types very often, they are often very challenging for me. This would be for personal website branding ... it reads Tyler G. Deeb. Too feminine? Do the shapes make sense? Where could it improve? Thx xo xo
Other than the comments mentioned above, the little loop at the end of your "b" looks a little wonked out. I only point it out because your other loops and curves seem to be so tight and clean, it makes the one look ill-considered. Great style, overall.
A little tight in the "yle" area? The loop of the L feels a little mini too compared to the jumbo bowls on the b and y. Lots of awesome weird letterforms in there though, don't lose them!
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Pedale Design
I don't work with script types very often, they are often very challenging for me. This would be for personal website branding ... it reads Tyler G. Deeb. Too feminine? Do the shapes make sense? Where could it improve? Thx xo xo
2 months ago
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Hannes Beer
Looks cool! I read "Pyler" - but I'm not sure if that's just me.
2 months ago
The "T" comes off as a "P". Overall I really really like it. It's super clean... vintage yet modern.
2 months ago
Looks sweet, I like where you're heading. Definitely agree with the first two comments though.
2 months ago
Yeah I got a P.
(I GOTTA PEE.)
2 months ago
I don't think it's feminine, and I agree that the T is reading as a P, but it's really well done!
2 months ago
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Pedale Design
Pyler sounds more tasty then Tyler. It was on purpose ... PSYCH!
Ok ... I hate to loose those loopty loo's, but you guys know waz up.
2 months ago
Quit tryna be fancy, hunh
2 months ago
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Andrew Harrington
Other than the comments mentioned above, the little loop at the end of your "b" looks a little wonked out. I only point it out because your other loops and curves seem to be so tight and clean, it makes the one look ill-considered. Great style, overall.
2 months ago
That G is hot fire
2 months ago
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Pedale Design
@Andrew Harrington Just fixed it a minute a go. Good call, looks way better now.
2 months ago
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Andy Luce
#proud
2 months ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=36BvyC_ODRM
2 months ago
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bijdevleet
Looks really impressive! First letter looks like a P though...
2 months ago
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Anton Warkentin
I dont think you need to remove the loopty loo's just move them to the left and connect them to make a more fluid T.
Maybe something like this?
http://imgur.com/oy0Fetz
2 months ago
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Pedale Design
@Anton Warkentin Dammmmmn Homie. Thanks for the solid advice.
2 months ago
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Dan Cassaro
A little tight in the "yle" area? The loop of the L feels a little mini too compared to the jumbo bowls on the b and y. Lots of awesome weird letterforms in there though, don't lose them!
2 months ago
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Anton Warkentin
@Pedale Design Any Time...isn't that what dribbble is here for? :)
2 months ago
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Karli Ingersoll
i dig this a ton! definitely unique shapes. looks like you should be doing more script. :)
2 months ago
This is freaking great. I almost feel bad just mentioning that the T might pass at a P.
2 months ago
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Pavlov Visuals
Yes
about 1 month ago