Makers Salon

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2 Responses

  1. christian dunn christian dunn

    Thoughts would be much appreciated. Thanks.

    about 1 year ago

  2. Ryan Lord Ryan Lord

    Overall, I like it. My two cents:

    1. The R and the S have a lot less negative space surrounding them on the right side, making the word heavier on the right. Tighten kerning on the M...A...K...E, Increase Kerning on E...R...S., I think this will help the balance.

    2. Lower the crossbar of the A a bit to make the negative space triangle larger and more balanced with the negative space under the crossbar.

    3. I think the M is too big on the secondary mark. I would decrease it's size some to where it's not so dominant.

    about 1 year ago

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