This is diggity. I don't think "Grand" has the same amount of arc that "Union" does. I'd make those equal. And Perhaps track in the 2012 to match the width of "EST"? I'm really liking that weird greenish/goldish color though.. (might just be my cheap ass monitor) haha
@Adam Trageser Thanks so much for the feedback, you're absolutely right! I'm a bit color blind (which explains most of my monochromatic shots), but I attempted a gold.
Most welcome, man. I hope you dont change the color b/c I mentioned it - I like it how it is. Also, I couldn't help but think it needs something to make it "sting". What i mean is.. err.. in the wordmark you did for Troop for instance, that arced baseline of "Troop" really gave the piece something to bite. I think something unique like that is in order here. I'll shut up now.
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Doing some reworking of an old logo for print. Thoughts appreciated.
3 months ago
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Adam Trageser
This is diggity. I don't think "Grand" has the same amount of arc that "Union" does. I'd make those equal. And Perhaps track in the 2012 to match the width of "EST"? I'm really liking that weird greenish/goldish color though.. (might just be my cheap ass monitor) haha
3 months ago
@Adam Trageser Thanks so much for the feedback, you're absolutely right! I'm a bit color blind (which explains most of my monochromatic shots), but I attempted a gold.
3 months ago
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Adam Trageser
Most welcome, man. I hope you dont change the color b/c I mentioned it - I like it how it is. Also, I couldn't help but think it needs something to make it "sting". What i mean is.. err.. in the wordmark you did for Troop for instance, that arced baseline of "Troop" really gave the piece something to bite. I think something unique like that is in order here. I'll shut up now.
3 months ago
Gotcha, you're right, it's a bit bland. This is the first version so your feedback is really helping. Thanks again @Adam Trageser
3 months ago
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Jay Higginbotham
Looking fantastic man!
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