Thanks you all for your feedback! I have improved the legibility of the "p" What do you think?
Check the attachment too.
10 months ago
Great improvement on legibility but for me was a nice touch the play on the p and the g that know gets lost, Prefer first version even if the p is not so clear. P bigger or g loop smaller. Hope it helps. Great work.
looks fantastic really nice type work
I agree with Luis. The first version had more character :)
I agree with Luis and Mikae. Now you can read it better but something is wrong with the straight line of the "p". Perhaps you could recover the curved line of the first "p" and apply it to this layout (I don't even know if this makes any sense)
There's a really nice style in this piece, the combination with the type above looks fantastic too. I definitely agree with the above comments that it reads easier in this version and the 'p' fits in much better. I do think the balance is a little lost currently, but I'd say the 'p' bowl just needs to be a bit wider and thicker in the vertical stem. The only other thing I'd suggest is that the 'g-a' strokes seem quite tight at the end. A little extra space there might look more natural.
Thanks for your comment, Claire. Your feedback is always very helpful to me. I'm working on those improvements :-)
by Máximo Gavete
Ok, the last one rebound. I promise you. Fixed "p" and more space between "g-a" strokes.
10 months ago
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