Newcastle 2

8 Responses

  1. Pro Kyle Chicoine Kyle Chicoine

    I closed the spacing and gave this concept some color. More critiques welcome!

    3 months ago

  2. Pro Virginia Poltrack Virginia Poltrack

    That feels more balanced to me, that's just my opinion! Out of curiosity, where did the colors come from? We're those given to you? Again, I can't overstate how much better I like the clean and classic look of your version!!!

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    3 months ago

  3. Pro chris walsh chris walsh

    yeah i am totes a big fan of the simplicity - they call me Captain Simplicity all the time (well that's not true - no one does that, but it would be nice if they did!)

    This seems like a nice standard color pallette, a lot of projects i've worked on recently (and did audits of) had this palette.

    What i would do next with this one - before sending it to the client - is to cut it up and move around the elements a bit, just to see if there are some alternate layouts. This is a cool column look, maybe try a row look, maybe have the diamond to the left? or even (in a row) have Newcastle .. DIAMOND .. CoC? These might suck but i always try and do all the easy alternates to make sure i am not missing out on some GOLD!

    Keep up the work buddy! (and listen to @Virginia Poltrack - she's the smmmmmmartest egg in the carton)

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    3 months ago

  4. Pro Virginia Poltrack Virginia Poltrack

    @chris walsh I dunno about THAT but thanks ;) sound advice my dear - I agree with the moving around to make sure nothing is overlooked. Kyle always does really solid work, and I have a feeling they will be really pleased with this. Also - this is really going to translate well across tons of mediums, which is always important. So nice work on that, too Kyle.

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    3 months ago

  5. Pro chris walsh chris walsh

    @Virginia Poltrack i agree! I really think this treatment and the other N (in the diamond) could really stand alone and content for various social media sites. :)

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    3 months ago

  6. Pro Kyle Chicoine Kyle Chicoine

    @chris walsh & @Virginia Poltrack Thanks so much you two! Really loving the comments here. I got some rest and have a fresh eye so I'm going to look at it again before I send off to my client for review.

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    3 months ago

  7. Alejandro Juárez Cobos Alejandro Juárez Cobos

    I like this one better, unlike the one with the integrated N in the diamond, this one has a more refined look, which is what this kind of enterprise is looking for, what I would do just to see how it goes, is try to give a little depth to the diamond shape, it may make it look even more refined...

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    3 months ago

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