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Ironman Pitch Work

by Mark Unger
Feb 21, 2013 | @2x

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5 Responses

  1. Mark Unger Mark Unger

    bronze, silver, gold, IRON.

    3 months ago

  2. Pro Matthew Evans Matthew Evans

    I fucking love this bro!

    3 months ago

  3. Ron Boucher Ron Boucher

    coulda been a contender...

    3 months ago

  4. Pro Guy Utley Guy Utley

    Nice

    3 months ago

  5. Pro Jacques Krzepkowski Jacques Krzepkowski

    General direction is looking good, but the type seems weak compared to the strength projected by the photography, logo and colour selections. Copy is well-done too — type needs to match that great effort.

    Perhaps the headline needs more personality (bolder and tighter, lose the all caps). The body copy either needs to be hyphenated or not fully justified, since it's leaving some bad gaps. Perhaps too much leading as well...

    Great start though. Excited to see where this goes.

    3 months ago

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