bronze, silver, gold, IRON.
3 months ago
I fucking love this bro!
coulda been a contender...
General direction is looking good, but the type seems weak compared to the strength projected by the photography, logo and colour selections. Copy is well-done too — type needs to match that great effort.
Perhaps the headline needs more personality (bolder and tighter, lose the all caps). The body copy either needs to be hyphenated or not fully justified, since it's leaving some bad gaps. Perhaps too much leading as well...
Great start though. Excited to see where this goes.
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