Granola Labels

10 Responses

1. Pro Jake Dugard

   Working up some labels.

   3 months ago

2. Pro Jay Higginbotham

   looking good!

   3 months ago

3. Ryan Lord

   I'm not a huge fan of serif i's mixed in to a san serif (unless the piece is really geometric and industrial). I know that's entirely a personal preference, but it's like they're screaming at me in the "ORIGINAL" text.

   Everything else looks great, love the flag.

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   3 months ago

4. Pro Yossi Belkin

   Love this!!

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   3 months ago

5. Pro Anthony Lane

   Good stuff, I particularly like I's that have crossbars and there's nothing odd about them. My only critique is the mixture of a hand-lettered script and super clean type. Have you thought about hand-lettering all of the sans-serif type? Or at least tracing the font and scanning in to give it the same feel as the script.

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   3 months ago

6. Paul Tynes

   A hotmail account? Really? The design is great, as always.

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   3 months ago

7. Ryan Lord

   You can like them, I said it was a personal preference, but they are odd. It's one serif character in the midst of san serif characters, that is by definition odd.

   I guess as people grow up with Verdana and Tahoma it will be less strange. Another thing to blame Microsoft for I guess. (mostly joking)

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   3 months ago

8. Pro Brendan Pittman

   Looks great. The I crossbars don't bother me but I did read "Grarola" at first on the script.

   3 months ago

9. Ryan Rushing

   These colors are really nice.

   Also, I agree with Brendan. The r and n is very similar and could be misread at first glance.

   3 months ago

10. Pro Jake Dugard

    @Ryan Rushing @Brendan Pittman
    Do you have any suggestions to make the "n" less "r"ish.

    3 months ago