Due to all the great feedback on the last two, I took it a new direction. More action, and flames. Thoughts people?
about 1 year ago
i feel like you lost something with this composition over the previous one. dig the flames and dynamism of the flag though. just the balance of the type and image bugs me.
do you need the giant black circle background? maybe try it with just the text and flag
This flag is on fire! Nice illustration!
Looking at the image and reading the comments above, I think tweaking the hierarchy of the overall design may help by downsizing the type a bit. Right now, the flag and type look like they're competing with each other. I'd also minimize the black oval texture to about 10-20% or something.
The direction you're going is good so far,though!
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