more explorations on the theme...
10 months ago
This layout is off to a good start. The “Orchards” line needs help. What if it were a larger point size and didn’t have the extra tracking? And the calligraphic flourish at the bottom could stand to be longer, perhaps about the length of the lines of text above it.
Great feedback, Thanks Delve. I can see already how it will be less "floaty", and more concise in design.
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