Another idea. Always welcome feedback.
3 months ago
This one definitely stays true to the tagline. It has a very handcrafted feel to it. Diggin it!
Love the vibe!
Looking good. I think the G has a little too much negative space that creates an awkward empty zone. Maybe bring the loop down some.
Very nice. I might give the 'n' a little more tweaking to differentiate it from the 'r'—at first glance, it looks sort of like "Grarola."
@David M. Smith @Mason Phillips Thanks for the feedback fellas. I'll work on those things.
Both of these directions are great man. I wouldn't change much here. Maybe the G could lean in a little more?
Feels like a travel postcard, so I kind of love it. Darken/flatten out the BG to give the letters a better read and I think you're close to golden.
I have a whole klan of family in Davis West Virginia, Who refer to all the Hikers on the AT as Damn Granola's
@Jake Dugard dude this is really nice, I love the style!
Oh I literally groaned a bit when I saw this. Seriously love what's going on here. Beautiful work!
@Mason Phillips Do you have any suggestions to make the "n" less "r"ish.
Hmm. Maybe round the shoulder of the 'n' a little more? You could also try dropping a line from the top of that 'a' connector down to the baseline so that the stem of the 'n' is more obvious. Hope that makes sense—dunno if I'm doing a great job of explaining this.
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