Sample shot from part of a new brochure for a local non-profit, Extra Table.
10 months ago
Nice little sample. Would love to see more. I like how you have the 100% slightly transparent. It kind of reinforces how the organization is being with the money.
I do feel like the alignment is off though. It could be that the header and logo or full justified and you have the copy w/ a right rag so it's giving the illusion that it's not aligned properly. The other issue I have with this piece which may be out of your control is the body copy. I feel like the message could be crafted with the same meaning but in a more elegant way. When reading this, the way the type is laid out you get "your community" on top of each other for three straight lines.
Thanks, Danny. I'll work with the alignment and see if I can't work with the copy a bit. I appreciate the feedback.
by Paul Tynes
Still working on it but this is the general idea. I would love some feedback.
10 months ago
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