keyboard shortcuts: ← previous shot → next shot L or F like
Show and tell for designers
What are you working on? Dribbble is a community of designers sharing screenshots of their work, process, and projects.
113,510,459,593 pixels dribbbled
Copyright © 2009–2013 Dribbble LLC. All screenshots © their respective owners. Shipped from Salem, Mass. USA.
32 Responses (page 1 of 2)
Pro
Mike Bruner
WIP. idea was to take the simple graphics of cigarette brand pack and take them into the shape of a coffin. not sure if this is the direction to go, but thought i would get any feedback or critiques that anyone has.
Check out the larger version also. if you have the time.
thanks.
3 months ago
Pro
Blake N. Behrens
Instantly communicates. Nice work, Mike.
3 months ago
Pro
Jon Campos
I got cigarette but not coffin. I think because In my head a coffin is longer.
3 months ago
Pro
Terry Dee
Looks rad man. Got that right away.
3 months ago
Pro
Mike Bruner
@Blake N. Behrens THX!
@Jon Campos that kind of what I've been concerned about. balance between graphically seeing the cig pack and coffin. It felt long enough to me in the larger poster size attached. thanks for the feedback.
http://dribbble.com/shots/945088-Cigarette-Coffin-Drib/attachments/106559
thx @Terry Dee
3 months ago
Pro
Ryan Rich
This could be a great PSA. No text, just the image, powerful stuff. Though I do agree with @Jon Campos , that it should be longer. Nice work.
3 months ago
Pro
Michael George Haddad
I like it, but just be aware: http://www.behance.net/gallery/Antismoke-pack/351592
3 months ago
Pro
Jeremy Teff
Great Concept.
3 months ago
Pro
Mike Bruner
THX @Ryan Rich .
@Michael George Haddad DAMN did not see that. thanks for the heads up, Mike.
3 months ago
Pro
Daniel Bruce
I got one word for you. Smart.
3 months ago
@Mike Bruner This is great. You need to fix the right side where the white and red meet. The white is poking out to the left and leaves a white line on the edge. Don't know if that was your intent or not though.
3 months ago
Knew exactly what it was! Very powerful! Great work!
3 months ago
I got it straight away. Maybe that's because I was a smoker for 7 years until last Sunday. Almost a week strong!
3 months ago
Pro
Erin Potter
Don't know how Phillip Morris would feel about it but the piece is pretty rad. Should try a version with the Newport graphics....there again, I don't know how MY parent company would like it.
3 months ago
Pro
Mike Bruner
@Daniel Bruce THX!
@Jacob Rosenburg yeah I saw that. still a rough. not sure it will ever get off the ground, but I thought it would strike a nerve out there.
@Erin Potter Yes that's why it may never get off the ground and may get buried. Lawyers! maybe I have to do one in a suit. HA!
@Andrew Colin Beck and @Mitch Bartlett thanks guys. And congrats on the week strong, Mitch. keep going. I've been smoke free for 57 years now. Course that's because I never started. HA! kidding with you of course. I know it would be tough going, but you'll make it. cheers.
3 months ago
Great idea!
3 months ago
Pro
Nemanja Jovanovic aka Frac...
cool idea for sure!
3 months ago
Pro
Jared Granger
Instant connection Mike—Love this! Good to see that you dabble in the world of art direction and ad concepts!
3 months ago
Pro
Marjan Žitnik
Cool! :)
3 months ago
Pro
Michael George Haddad
I hate being that guy haha. But... this is an ad concept, while the other seems to be more of a product design.
3 months ago
Pro
Mike Bruner
@vinslëv , @Nemo Jovanovic aka Fracturize and @Marjan Žitnik THX!
@Jared Granger ad world, yeah I have been doing that stuff for 33 years, I would like to do more graphic work. Love it all though. Thanks.
@Michael George Haddad I know, but the idea is in the same room. Just hadn't seen it. But they did a nice job on the box. awesome.
3 months ago
Pro
Julius Seniūnas
smart !
3 months ago
Pro
Chad Riedel
Im really digging that shadow!
3 months ago
genius
3 months ago
I had no problem recognizing both the coffin and cig pack. Great idea and execution.. I personally would love to see some others.
3 months ago