Putting some finishing touches on my personal site. Feedback is welcome.
10 months ago
Nice Ryan, looks very clean and pro. Btw, i woud use full space for the first paragraph or use 2 columns as the second part. It's a bit baffling i think :) Good work tough :)
Looks good! Be careful when justifying the text. It looks like some space is forced on some lines.
Smooth and clean. The only thing is that the blur is too intense and the social icons take way too much attention, especially in contrast to your avatar. Good job.
The icons look great! The only thing that I think you could improve is maybe putting a slight-box shadow around your work (the iPhone) to give it some depth and seperation from the call-to-action area.
This looks like it's going to be awesome when it's finished, I really like the blurred bg, I would keep it. Have you thought about making the opening paragraph a larger size text in order to make it more obvious as an introductory paragraph? That would also sort out the alignment problem of it's width in comparison to the others that's been mentioned above.
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