That helps quite a bit! I wonder if you could cheat the ear just a tad bit taller, but just a little. That does help a lot though, nice move! Much less like a Brachiosaurus/lizard/bird now! :)
@Sean Heisler Haha! Thanks again for the really valuable input bud! I really like where this went from previous look. I've made an ear taller in the plain version (which is attached), take a look.
I definitely think it reads more as a fox now. I showed 3 co-workers and the two that are designers said fox/wolve and eventually said or a house. One co-worker who is not a designer said sailboat.
I personally see the fox now and love it but am still struggling with the house. I know that doesn't help much and I am trying to think of a suggestion to help but am coming up short. The one thing I can say is that I believe the shape that is making the tail is breaking the house for me. One thing I am thinking is inverting that shape and making the tail out of the negative space and giving it a slight curve to help w/ the shape of the tail.
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Milosz Klimek
WIP. Exploration.
So, I made an ear.
Is this a little clearer right now? I'm going for a minimalistic & geometric shaped look.
3 months ago
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Radu Jianu
Great job, Milosz! ;)
3 months ago
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Sean Heisler
That helps quite a bit! I wonder if you could cheat the ear just a tad bit taller, but just a little. That does help a lot though, nice move! Much less like a Brachiosaurus/lizard/bird now! :)
3 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
@Radu Jianu Cheers!
@Sean Heisler Haha! Thanks again for the really valuable input bud! I really like where this went from previous look. I've made an ear taller in the plain version (which is attached), take a look.
3 months ago
Very nice! I can definitely can see the FOX now.
3 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
@Justin Garand That's great to hear, thank you.
3 months ago
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Roko Kerovec
I'm a chicken and I like this.
3 months ago
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Danny Johnson Junior
I definitely think it reads more as a fox now. I showed 3 co-workers and the two that are designers said fox/wolve and eventually said or a house. One co-worker who is not a designer said sailboat.
I personally see the fox now and love it but am still struggling with the house. I know that doesn't help much and I am trying to think of a suggestion to help but am coming up short. The one thing I can say is that I believe the shape that is making the tail is breaking the house for me. One thing I am thinking is inverting that shape and making the tail out of the negative space and giving it a slight curve to help w/ the shape of the tail.
3 months ago
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Michele Angeloro
i see a fox
3 months ago
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Roberto Torres
Yep, the ear helps quite a bit. Looks good. Nice job!
3 months ago
Thats really neat.
3 months ago
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Gert van Duinen
Isn't it a cuty!
3 months ago
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Florin Capota
dig this MIlosz!
3 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
@Roko Kerovec @Danny Johnson Junior @Michele Angeloro @Roberto Torres @Nick Hood @Gert van Duinen @Florin Capota Thanks a ton buddies!
3 months ago
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Diana Hlevnjak
Wow!
3 months ago
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Jovan Petrić
Fox? Clear as day.
3 months ago
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Milosz Klimek
@Diana Hlevnjak Cheers!
@Jovan Petrić It's good to hear that.
3 months ago