Still a work in progress...any advice is more than welcome :)
3 months ago
sweet! I like the heart in the k.. overall it looks like it's written with a marker, literally. not sure if that was your intention.
also, I see o's instead of a's... I kept reading it as slotkoriyo, even tho it makes no sense as name. (you know, being half-slavic)
the "ij" connection is really close to be read as "y", the dots help with that a bit.
1. I would make the overall letters smoother, either loose or smooth, but this is something in between.
2. because this is a long word.. I would think about making breaks, and cut them in groups, and see how that works out (like slot-kori-ja). @Claire can write you a song about that, she's my typographic mentor & guru, she definetely has some better advice than I.
Thanks so much for the comment Daniel! I've been looking at it for too long so it's great to hear an objective opinion ;)
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