Slatkarija

3 Responses

1. Vanja Blajic

   Still a work in progress...any advice is more than welcome :)

   3 months ago

2. Pro Daniel Keller

   sweet! I like the heart in the k.. overall it looks like it's written with a marker, literally. not sure if that was your intention.

   also, I see o's instead of a's... I kept reading it as slotkoriyo, even tho it makes no sense as name. (you know, being half-slavic)
   the "ij" connection is really close to be read as "y", the dots help with that a bit.

   1. I would make the overall letters smoother, either loose or smooth, but this is something in between.
   2. because this is a long word.. I would think about making breaks, and cut them in groups, and see how that works out (like slot-kori-ja). @Claire can write you a song about that, she's my typographic mentor & guru, she definetely has some better advice than I.

   3 months ago

3. Vanja Blajic

   Thanks so much for the comment Daniel! I've been looking at it for too long so it's great to hear an objective opinion ;)

   3 months ago