Personnal illustration entiteled "Celeste". Any critiques are welcome !
4 months ago
@Nuruzzaman Sheikh Thanks
Only things I'm not keen on are the stark white circles and the red and white splatters (blood brushes?) - just don't think they add anything, don't really fit the composition :)
@Benjamin Brown thanks for your comment. The Red "splatters" are Rose petals with motion blur to make the artwork more dynamic like the flying cloths on the left or right. Moreover, the stark white circles arround the central sphere are positioned on differents circles to look like a representation of solar system. It was a choice to make a sence with the title "Celeste" (Space, Univers, etc)
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@EVADE I *meant* to say that I actually like the white circles idea (obviously solar system), but think they could be better with a different treatment, a little lowered opacity or something. But anyways, like i said, I still think this is great :)
Oh ok :) you're right with the different treatment of this circles. The white is too much bright compared to the other colors. I could add a texture or create empty circles with only a outline or something like that ;) Thanks a lot for your comment !
(Sorry if my english is not really perfect. This is not my native language)
@EVADE it's basically as good as mine, and i'm native :)
Welcome to dribbble, nice debut shot.
@Mike Busby Thank you :)
Awesome work! Welcome to the fun.
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