Don't make the 'e' straight. It supports the whole idea like it is now.
I would suggest you do something like these 2 which have more strength in delivering the message.
What do you think?
3 months ago
I prefer the bottom piece!
Love the bottom one, but they're both awesome!
The Bottom one. Go for the bottom one!
@Roydon @Diana @Harmen Thanks for the feedback guys! It will be up to @Alice Louise to decide if she wants to go with this approach. I just made a suggestion.
I would choose the top one. It looks more like a bite there.
I prefer the top one too.
Definitely prefer the bottom one! Thank you! I was messing round with bite marks before, but mine looked too much like the apple logo
No problem @Alice I like sharing ideas. Hope I've been of help ;)
Love the bottom one.
Really like the top one because it looks more like a bite, the bottom one looks like a cloud for me.
Anyway both are quite good mate!
Nice negative space
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