No problem. I often get blinded to things like that when I'm working on them. I spend all my time trying to balance the date, that I miss something else. It's looking really good.
Agree with what Stefan said and I wonder if a hairline cut above the thicker cut below might make it even clearer. Also, maybe a little kerning on the year (between 1 and 9) :)
Good looking out Josh! I hadn't considered the kerning but now that you mention it I kind of like the imperfection there. Sort of goes with the hand-crafted vibe.
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Element for a motion piece I'm working on.
over 1 year ago
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Stefan Hartwig
I really like this. The deep red is very eyecatching, as is the cut through the hammer for definition. Very nice. Suggested tag: #ballpeenftw
over 1 year ago
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Stefan Hartwig
Oh, btw. Looks like the hammers might be off center.... Just a quick thing I noticed.
over 1 year ago
Thanks Stefan! I think you're right about the centering issue.
over 1 year ago
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Stefan Hartwig
No problem. I often get blinded to things like that when I'm working on them. I spend all my time trying to balance the date, that I miss something else. It's looking really good.
over 1 year ago
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Corey Haggard
Very nice debut shot. Welcome to Dribbble!!
over 1 year ago
Thanks Corey!
over 1 year ago
Agree with what Stefan said and I wonder if a hairline cut above the thicker cut below might make it even clearer. Also, maybe a little kerning on the year (between 1 and 9) :)
over 1 year ago
Good looking out Josh! I hadn't considered the kerning but now that you mention it I kind of like the imperfection there. Sort of goes with the hand-crafted vibe.
over 1 year ago
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Sascha M. Trinkaus
Superb! Welcome
over 1 year ago