Re: book, I don't find it heavy at all. My first instinct if you want to play with it would be to block off a lighter colour like it's a photo, or increase the leading in the lines to lighten it up.
I do find the lines separating the dynamite a bit too delicate for the style. Other than that they're perfect.
Those shadows are tasty! I would fill in the holes at the bottom of the key with the shadow gray, as that would be negative area that one would see through.
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Ryan Kiley
More icons coming along for the website. Not so sure about the right side of the book - the left side feels a little heavy. Suggestions?
4 months ago
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Octopus Creative
Nice!
4 months ago
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Meghan Robichaud
These are lovely.
Re: book, I don't find it heavy at all. My first instinct if you want to play with it would be to block off a lighter colour like it's a photo, or increase the leading in the lines to lighten it up.
I do find the lines separating the dynamite a bit too delicate for the style. Other than that they're perfect.
4 months ago
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Ryan Kiley
@Meghan thanks a lot for the input - I'll definitely play with these a little more. Good call on the dynamite.
4 months ago
Those shadows are tasty! I would fill in the holes at the bottom of the key with the shadow gray, as that would be negative area that one would see through.
4 months ago