Honestly, I'm not too sure about this one @Bill S Kenney Seems like where the lines and circles intersect could be a little smoother. I get where your going on this but I'm just not too sure about it. Something isn't sitting right for me.
.....just my 2 cents.
Yeah the lines are a bit distracting on this version... I prefer the solid, filled-in shots. This one is less subtle and definitely gets the % insinuation across, but to be honest, I think being more abstract with it is OK.
I'd also wonder about scaling issues with the stroke so small?
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Bill S Kenney
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4 months ago
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Eduardo Santos
Damn.
4 months ago
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Majo Moravcik
this is clever... like it ;-)
4 months ago
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Matthew Sanders
@Bill S Kenney Great math. I love line art in logo marks.
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Earl Carlson
Beautiful!
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Christopher Magruder
Honestly, I'm not too sure about this one @Bill S Kenney
Seems like where the lines and circles intersect could be a little smoother. I get where your going on this but I'm just not too sure about it. Something isn't sitting right for me.
.....just my 2 cents.
4 months ago
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Riki Tanone
Agree with @Christopher Magruder. This doesn't feel clean with all the line intersections. :(
4 months ago
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Jake Toolson
Been following your ideas for this particular design. Thought I'd at least leave a comment for once. All I see are fingers. I don't know why.
4 months ago
Yeah the lines are a bit distracting on this version... I prefer the solid, filled-in shots. This one is less subtle and definitely gets the % insinuation across, but to be honest, I think being more abstract with it is OK.
I'd also wonder about scaling issues with the stroke so small?
4 months ago