The Beginning

6 Responses

1. Abe Vizcarra

   of something i'm building...

   Also, this is supposed to look like a B with angled view of a building.

   Feedback welcome.

   4 months ago

2. Pro Graham Stinson

   Cool. Would it work better if the perspective carried through the strokes of the B? Right now they look like they're parallel, and that seems (to me) to throw off the effect.

   4 months ago

3. Abe Vizcarra

   Thanks @Graham Stinson that was the trickiest part of this piece. I'll have to rethink this a bit. I appreciate the feedback.

   4 months ago

4. Pro Bill Gaines

   Fun! You could also think about adding some details to bring out the building part.. a subtle masonry texture on the dark side or a light post, or more 'windows'..

   4 months ago

5. Abe Vizcarra

   Thanks @Bill Gaines good ideas.

   4 months ago

6. Christopher Michon

   The middle line of the "B" not matching the perspective makes it all a little off. Also, the indent on the right might need to be a little bigger.

   2 months ago