I really think you're onto something here man. Maybe work on the forms and how to emphasize that it is an 'M'? If I saw this without the context of your name, I don't know if I'd make the connection.
I guess it depends on how you use it though. If it's always used with a wordmark of your name, you might be fine. That center circle looks a little off balance too?
It's really cool though. Super different from most monograms, which is nice.
I'm currently looking at just using different forms/styles of the letter to work in conjunction with the website. They are all kept in the same badge size and color style so it can have the that unified aspect, but show off different aspects of my own style depending on the area being displayed (typography,posters, etc.).
I'm definitively looking at what type would fit well with it since I'm treading in unexplored waters.
Yeah I just caught that! hah, I did a bit of editing and worked with making the M letter form much stronger. I'll post a follow up when I get home. Thanks for the feedback man! I really appreciate it!
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Working on a new identity by exploring different versions of the letter M. Any feed back would be greatly appreciated!
4 months ago
I really think you're onto something here man. Maybe work on the forms and how to emphasize that it is an 'M'? If I saw this without the context of your name, I don't know if I'd make the connection.
I guess it depends on how you use it though. If it's always used with a wordmark of your name, you might be fine. That center circle looks a little off balance too?
It's really cool though. Super different from most monograms, which is nice.
4 months ago
I'm currently looking at just using different forms/styles of the letter to work in conjunction with the website. They are all kept in the same badge size and color style so it can have the that unified aspect, but show off different aspects of my own style depending on the area being displayed (typography,posters, etc.).
I'm definitively looking at what type would fit well with it since I'm treading in unexplored waters.
Yeah I just caught that! hah, I did a bit of editing and worked with making the M letter form much stronger. I'll post a follow up when I get home. Thanks for the feedback man! I really appreciate it!
4 months ago
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Letter M
by Miguel Carrasquillo
Another look at an idea I'm working on, any feedback would be most welcomed!
3 months ago