Not sure if you are looking for feedback this is just my two cents.
I think it might be important to look at the thick / thin relationship of the letters. The top and bottom part of the "a" should be a lot closer to how the "e" is when going from wide to thin. This applies to the capital "S" as well as to the "r". The cross bar on the "t" also seems quite wide as is should be closer in weight to the thin lines on the "l" and "e'.
If you are trying to make the letters look like they were done in one stroke than the "t" ligature should be dropped down to meet the thin stroke of the "e"
The "l-a" & "t-e" kerning seems quite loose compared to the "a-t" and "e-r".
This is looking great! Hand drawn lettering is awesome, I think it can really reflect the style of a designer, which I think is evident here. Nice work. I echo your thoughts on Adam Trageser's stuff, it's amazing.
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Milosz Klimek
Slick type man.
4 months ago
So nice! Mad skills.
4 months ago
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Richie Stewart
Not sure if you are looking for feedback this is just my two cents.
I think it might be important to look at the thick / thin relationship of the letters. The top and bottom part of the "a" should be a lot closer to how the "e" is when going from wide to thin. This applies to the capital "S" as well as to the "r". The cross bar on the "t" also seems quite wide as is should be closer in weight to the thin lines on the "l" and "e'.
If you are trying to make the letters look like they were done in one stroke than the "t" ligature should be dropped down to meet the thin stroke of the "e"
The "l-a" & "t-e" kerning seems quite loose compared to the "a-t" and "e-r".
4 months ago
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Michael Spitz
Solid take on the style Nick.
4 months ago
This is looking great! Hand drawn lettering is awesome, I think it can really reflect the style of a designer, which I think is evident here. Nice work. I echo your thoughts on Adam Trageser's stuff, it's amazing.
4 months ago
@Nick Slater danm dat texture is a beauty.
4 months ago
Sexy type.
4 months ago
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Kevin Layshock
dat sssssssss!
4 months ago
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Alen Type08 Pavlovic
Stuff like this got you to 10.000 followers broski! Keep on rockin!
4 months ago
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Nick Slater
@Alen Type08 Pavlovic Thanks man for the kind words :D
4 months ago
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Slater WIP
by Nick Slater
Thank you all for your feedback on my previous shot. I also thought it was hard trying to make your own logo. I hope this is in a better direction.
3 months ago
Pretty badass
about 1 month ago