First half of second version of my personal logo. I can't decide on something more contrasty or heavy like this. Any thoughts? Any crits on the letterforms themselves are welcome!
Thanks so much, @Luke Anspach! With this version the original brush pen strokes are more evident. Getting the second half together will help with the overall image, I'm sure. :P
I quite like it! The thickness is great! Though I would move the e a tad bit to the right so there's a little more space between the d and e and make the e slightly bigger. Visually it looks to be the smallest of the letters. Overall I think the flow is lovely!
I find for me I can't seem to break away from always having my letters look so girly!
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Danielle Evans
First half of second version of my personal logo. I can't decide on something more contrasty or heavy like this. Any thoughts? Any crits on the letterforms themselves are welcome!
4 months ago
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Luke Anspach
I think it's solid. I prefer this to the other though. I think the textured background gives a nice supportive effect to the type. Great work!
4 months ago
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Virginia Poltrack
Agree with the above statements - I think it's lovely - just the right bit of whimsy and flourish and contrast. I think it works really well!
4 months ago
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Danielle Evans
Thanks so much, @Luke Anspach! With this version the original brush pen strokes are more evident. Getting the second half together will help with the overall image, I'm sure. :P
4 months ago
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Danielle Evans
Thanks @Virginia Poltrack! You snuck right in there! :D
4 months ago
Looks like your tendencies and my interpretive restrictions are playing very nicely together! This may be your sassiest smarminess lettering yet!
4 months ago
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Muhammad Ali Effendy
Very very nice!
3 months ago
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Danielle Evans
Thanks @Muhammad Ali Effendy!
3 months ago
thats great!
3 months ago
I quite like it! The thickness is great! Though I would move the e a tad bit to the right so there's a little more space between the d and e and make the e slightly bigger. Visually it looks to be the smallest of the letters. Overall I think the flow is lovely!
I find for me I can't seem to break away from always having my letters look so girly!
12 days ago