A Loving Life (WIP)

12 Responses

1. Peter Voth

   Would really love to hear your opinion on that cover. What do you think? I'm thankful for any kind of feedback and suggestion. Thanks.

   TYPE
   Mensch (Thin) by @Morgan Allan Knutson
   Edmond Sans (Regular) by @James T. Edmondson

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   4 months ago

2. Pro Brice Beasley

   Damn good looking cover. Love the type styles and composition.

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   4 months ago

3. Peter Voth

   Wow ... thanks @Brice :)

   4 months ago

4. Pro Inka Mathew

   I really like the overall look of this. The photograph and the offset mirror effect. I'm reading In A World of first instead of Loving Life. I'm assuming the title is supposed to be "A Loving Life In a World of Broken Relationship"? If yes, A LOVING still needs to be first tied together with LIFE. I actually just noticed the "A" at the last minute before I posted this comment. So just rework the type arrangement I think.

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   4 months ago

5. Peter Voth

   Thanks @Inka ... I needed this kind of feedback. Your assessment was right, the title is "A Loving Life - In a World of Broken Relationships" ...

   4 months ago

6. Katie Rhea Stokes

   I actually missed the A at first... but really think this is beautiful! so nicely done.

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   4 months ago

7. Daniel Golden

   It looks b-e-a-u-t-i-f-u-l, though I think a few things could be adjusted to make it even better.

   • When I look at it, I read "A in a world of loving broken relationships life". Though after I realized that that probably wasn't the tile I understood that one one was the subtitle.

   • I think that the, what seems to be, inverted border around the outside is a little to "in your face". I think it's worth taking a swing at making it more subtle in some way.

   • Last of all, it took me a moment to find the first "A" in the title. At first glance, I thought it was just an oil rig.

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   4 months ago

8. Peter Voth

   Thanks for the feedback @Katie and @Daniel! It will help to develop the cover.

   Offtopic: You sing AWESOME @Daniel :)

   4 months ago

9. Zach Hink

   Beautiful cover man. Yeah I think the "A" is the only thing throwing me off. Sitting right on the horizon the A feels placed in the landscape where the other words float over the layout.

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   4 months ago

10. Peter Voth

    That was kind of the idea (optical illusion)... @Zach :)

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    4 months ago

11. Rakeem Russell

    'Tidy' design, nice

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    3 months ago

12. Peter Voth

    Thanks @Rakeem :)

    3 months ago