Compared to the other two you attached the original is the strongest. The one facing right makes me read it right to left because of the worm's face and glasses.
@Tomas Vateha nice, nice and nice! THX
@Jacob Rosenburg see your point, but it does feel like the worm is crawling to the left and then it struggles with the word "Bookworm".
@Alen Type08 Pavlovic yeah I do like the more playful feel to it overall with the right version, so I guess I'll just stare at it awhile. They put this project on hold for a bit so I have some time. (Just so it don't go away altogether.) thanks for the critique.
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Mike Bruner
just something for a project coming up.
4 months ago
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Michael George Haddad
nice one
4 months ago
Flatworm
4 months ago
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Nuruzzaman Sheikh
Amazing!
4 months ago
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Mark McCoy
Fan-freaking-tastic.
4 months ago
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Blake N. Behrens
Cut it in half to double your reading!
4 months ago
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James Word
Love this texture @Mike Bruner !
4 months ago
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TAS
just be ............................... my Hero !!
4 months ago
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Mike Bruner
@Michael George Haddad , @Jacob Rosenburg , @Nuruzzaman Sheikh , @Mark McCoy , @Blake N. Behrens , @James Word and @Type and Signs thank so much for the feedback.
I had also tried one where the head of the worm was at the same height as the rest of the pages. Thought the "W" stood out better, but it felt like it was getting a little busy with the glasses and all. What you think? check out the attachment. http://dribbble.com/shots/920043-Bookworm/attachments/101905
Also have one showing the worm going right, here.
http://dribbble.com/shots/920043-Bookworm/attachments/101907
4 months ago
like , tweet, bucket :)
4 months ago
Compared to the other two you attached the original is the strongest. The one facing right makes me read it right to left because of the worm's face and glasses.
4 months ago
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Alen Type08 Pavlovic
The one facing right makes more sense and more fun, because the eye first reads the W and then you spot the worm at the end of it - pure gem uncle!
4 months ago
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Mike Bruner
@Tomas Vateha nice, nice and nice! THX
@Jacob Rosenburg see your point, but it does feel like the worm is crawling to the left and then it struggles with the word "Bookworm".
@Alen Type08 Pavlovic yeah I do like the more playful feel to it overall with the right version, so I guess I'll just stare at it awhile. They put this project on hold for a bit so I have some time. (Just so it don't go away altogether.) thanks for the critique.
4 months ago
YES! Brilliant!
4 months ago
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James Fletcher
LMAO, Love it.
4 months ago
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Radu Jianu
Triple entendre!!! I love it! Amazing concept, Mike!
4 months ago
Why didn't I think of that! :) Nice!
4 months ago
Yeah! :)
4 months ago
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Florin Capota
haha so great Mike, also in favor for the right side version :D
4 months ago
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Luis Lopez Grueiro
Winner worm Mike!!
4 months ago
Genius idea!
4 months ago
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Housseynou Fall
Hahah, awesome!
4 months ago
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Simon Frouws
Makes me feel all worm and fuzzy. +:-)
4 months ago
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Andrus Valulis
Amazing logo and great idea!
4 months ago
The W is much stronger if the worm is facing right. Nicely done.
4 months ago