I like it, the scanlines behind the boat seem to be competing with the boat to me. I feel like it would pop more if they were either gone or lessened.
over 1 year ago
Thanks, Johnny! Yeah, I felt the background was too empty without some texture, but I think I can lessen it a bit.
Great shot David. Really dig it. Would love to see it in color too.
Like it like it is. Seems (close to) perfect to me! :)
Thanks for the great comments! I do want to go through a few iterations just to see how it looks in color. The goal is to get to a full mock website.
Gorgeous. Not a huge fan of the stroke around the inner circle though (where the illustration sits). I wonder how it would look if it was just clean...
by David Sutoyo
Logo for a fictitious company. What do you think of the colors?
9 months ago
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I like it, the scanlines behind the boat seem to be competing with the boat to me. I feel like it would pop more if they were either gone or lessened.
over 1 year ago
Thanks, Johnny! Yeah, I felt the background was too empty without some texture, but I think I can lessen it a bit.
over 1 year ago
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BJ Clark
Great shot David. Really dig it. Would love to see it in color too.
over 1 year ago
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Michel Bozgounov
Like it like it is. Seems (close to) perfect to me! :)
over 1 year ago
Thanks for the great comments! I do want to go through a few iterations just to see how it looks in color. The goal is to get to a full mock website.
over 1 year ago
Pro
Bryan Le
Gorgeous. Not a huge fan of the stroke around the inner circle though (where the illustration sits). I wonder how it would look if it was just clean...
over 1 year ago
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Boat, Take 2
by David Sutoyo
Logo for a fictitious company. What do you think of the colors?
over 1 year ago
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Pescadores
by David Sutoyo
9 months ago