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Boat, Take 1

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8 Responses

  1. Johnny Johnny Waterman

    I like it, the scanlines behind the boat seem to be competing with the boat to me. I feel like it would pop more if they were either gone or lessened.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Profile David Sutoyo

    Thanks, Johnny! Yeah, I felt the background was too empty without some texture, but I think I can lessen it a bit.

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Pro Gravatar BJ Clark

    Great shot David. Really dig it. Would love to see it in color too.

    over 1 year ago

  4. Pro Optimiced-avatar Michel Bozgounov

    Like it like it is. Seems (close to) perfect to me! :)

    over 1 year ago

  5. Profile David Sutoyo

    Thanks for the great comments! I do want to go through a few iterations just to see how it looks in color. The goal is to get to a full mock website.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Pro Smaller_headshot Bryan Le

    Gorgeous. Not a huge fan of the stroke around the inner circle though (where the illustration sits). I wonder how it would look if it was just clean...

    over 1 year ago

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