First I have to say a big THANK YOU to CJ Zilligen for drafting me! Hope you enjoy my future posts, as much as I'll enjoy sharing them.
Concept here was pretty simple, try and find a way to combine the super simplified style of the Dolphin Stadium logo, which has been rumoured to be the inspiration of the upcoming Dolphins rebrand, with their current identity so that the history and heritage wont be completely lost.
Would love to hear everyone's feedback. Thanks for viewing.
Nice to see you on here, Steve. I enjoy this concept but I would "sharpen" it up a bit. It's kind of round and fluffy at the moment. All the key lines are rounded which makes it cute. Get it a little closer to the Dolphin Stadium logo and you'll really have something.
Thanks for the welcomes and the compliments, they're much appreciated.
@Bob Schultz and @Radu Jianu I deliberately didn't make the logo very sharp. Dolphins to me aren't sharp and aggressive like sharks, they're smart, fast and intelligent. The sharpness of the Dolphin Stadium logo is actually one of the things I dont like about it, but with that said maybe I could make the curved endings to the fins smaller so they appear more pointed and make the white keyline sharp and that might be enough. What do you think?
Nice shot! I like your concept here in terms of 'smart, fast, and intelligent'. Maybe you can do something to highlight these intended attributes. Give the mascot some reference.
Cheers and welcome to the game!
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First I have to say a big THANK YOU to CJ Zilligen for drafting me! Hope you enjoy my future posts, as much as I'll enjoy sharing them.
Concept here was pretty simple, try and find a way to combine the super simplified style of the Dolphin Stadium logo, which has been rumoured to be the inspiration of the upcoming Dolphins rebrand, with their current identity so that the history and heritage wont be completely lost.
Would love to hear everyone's feedback. Thanks for viewing.
Steve
4 months ago
Nice to see you on here, Steve. I enjoy this concept but I would "sharpen" it up a bit. It's kind of round and fluffy at the moment. All the key lines are rounded which makes it cute. Get it a little closer to the Dolphin Stadium logo and you'll really have something.
4 months ago
Cool debut! Welcome to Dribble :)
4 months ago
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Austin Neill
welcome
4 months ago
looks great!
4 months ago
Welcome, Steve! Glad to see you on board.
4 months ago
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Radu Jianu
Great job, Steve! Welcome!
I agree with @Bob on this one! Sharper outlines so it won't be so "cute". Apart from this, it's awesome!
4 months ago
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Simona Merlini
welcome!
4 months ago
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Dash
That's pretty cool! Welcome to dribbble @Steve!
4 months ago
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Mike Busby
Cool shot, welcome to the site!
4 months ago
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CJ Zilligen
No problem at all! It's great to have you on dribbble! :)
4 months ago
Thanks for the welcomes and the compliments, they're much appreciated.
@Bob Schultz and @Radu Jianu I deliberately didn't make the logo very sharp. Dolphins to me aren't sharp and aggressive like sharks, they're smart, fast and intelligent. The sharpness of the Dolphin Stadium logo is actually one of the things I dont like about it, but with that said maybe I could make the curved endings to the fins smaller so they appear more pointed and make the white keyline sharp and that might be enough. What do you think?
4 months ago
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Radu Jianu
Yup @Steve! That is exactly what I was talking about, the white keyline to be sharp. ;)
4 months ago
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Norman Chan
Nice shot! I like your concept here in terms of 'smart, fast, and intelligent'. Maybe you can do something to highlight these intended attributes. Give the mascot some reference.
Cheers and welcome to the game!
4 months ago
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Jivaldi
Sup Steve, welcome. Nice shot.
4 months ago
Well done. Swish!
2 months ago