You are magical

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  1. Kristen Drozdowski Kristen Drozdowski

    HELP! I really want this to look nice... but some things are looking way off to me... what do you think? I would love some critique. :)

    about 1 year ago

  2. Adam Rossi Adam Rossi

    looks great to me! the only critique that jumps out at me would be the 'are' - i read 'mare' because of the M being so close. maybe make the are smaller, or somehow create some separation so it doesn't flow quite so naturally after the M?

    anyway, very nice work, love it!

    about 1 year ago

  3. Kristen Drozdowski Kristen Drozdowski

    @Adam Rossi thank you!! Good point! I'm gonna do somethin' about that. :)

    about 1 year ago

  4. Dan Burgess Dan Burgess

    Hey Kristen, I think this looks really good. Perhaps what is looking a little off is the top line. It distracts from the 'you' and has no real relevance as it's not attached to anything. I see it mirrors the bottom line but it's just kind of floating there. I could be wrong but it's just what jumps out at me. Good luck with it, keep tweaking! :)

    about 1 year ago

  5. Kristen Drozdowski Kristen Drozdowski

    @Dan Burgess thanks! now that you mention it, I can't stand it! I like the mirroring balance, but I think if I could make it less distracting and maybe connect it to something it would look better.

    about 1 year ago

  6. Getting there! I might only tweak a little more. See a anything else that bothers you?? I'd love to hear about it.

    about 1 year ago

  7. The Orca Design Co. The Orca Design Co.

    Really cool!

    about 1 year ago

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