I think it would benefit from the black waves being screened back a bit and the green one being more dominate. I know you are trying to match it to the colors of the typeface, but it the black wave was a lighter grey, it would help it not feel so heavy. I like it though!
Good point @Jason Kirtley It makes me wonder if a little white gap around the green wave would do it. In other words, break the black wave where it intersects with the green. This would save the 1-color print from having strange variation.
I also agree with @Jim Gay that it might look nice also to put some strokes around the green wave to give some breathing space between the two. That is a good idea as well to experiment on.
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It turns out my last mark for my buddy's new company used the wrong word, "harmony" when it should have been "harmonic."
This is a redux, including a nice little sin(x) and sin(2x) plot (his idea).
5 months ago
Nice mark!
It feels left-heavy though. Like the symbol should be shifted right to balance the weight of the upper left of the waves
5 months ago
@Jim Gay Yeah, I hear you. The balance does look off every time I come back to it. I'll tweak it some more. Thanks!
5 months ago
I think it would benefit from the black waves being screened back a bit and the green one being more dominate. I know you are trying to match it to the colors of the typeface, but it the black wave was a lighter grey, it would help it not feel so heavy. I like it though!
5 months ago
@Jason Kirtley Yeah, good idea. I'll give that a try as well.
5 months ago
Good point @Jason Kirtley
It makes me wonder if a little white gap around the green wave would do it. In other words, break the black wave where it intersects with the green. This would save the 1-color print from having strange variation.
5 months ago
I also agree with @Jim Gay that it might look nice also to put some strokes around the green wave to give some breathing space between the two. That is a good idea as well to experiment on.
5 months ago
Great mark
5 months ago